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In this forum, you will be able to post writing samples. Others will critique it, helping you to improve your writing.
I will also post writing lessons, both for creative writing and for communicating through messages, whether in old-fashioned mail or in Internet based mail or forums.
This forum is now open for business. Please suggest new topics on this thread.
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Cool!!
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Yeah! This is going to be fun! I love writing stories, so this is just what I need!... Sooo, you post a part of a story you've written, and then other people tell you how you could improve it?
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Falling from the rooftop
Crashing like a raindrop
Can you make my heart stop
Shaking like a leaf
Standing at the floodgate
Steady as an earthquake
Can you hear my heart break
Tearing at the seams
~Bebo Norman, Drifting
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Yeah! This is going to be fun! I love writing stories, so this is just what I need!... Sooo, you post a part of a story you've written, and then other people tell you how you could improve it?
Yes, that's one of the writing exercises we'll do. Stay tuned.
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Yes!...
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Falling from the rooftop
Crashing like a raindrop
Can you make my heart stop
Shaking like a leaf
Standing at the floodgate
Steady as an earthquake
Can you hear my heart break
Tearing at the seams
~Bebo Norman, Drifting
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Oh! How fun! 
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Heh, this maybe fun, and such a good learning experinse for me, with my comprehendtion problem. I have lived with it all my life, and I want to find ways around it and to over come it.
What I really want in my writing to improve is poetry. I love to express my feelings in a poem, but doing one is the hard part, it takes a while. Plus I want to know all the different kinds of poetry out there.
I will also participate in the writing paragraphs and making sentences sound right.
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I warn you when I tell things about my stories: I MAKE UP NAMES! Some of my names aren't real names, and I don't like other people using them without permission. I have no idea why. I guess I'm just greedy.  Anyway, I made up a character that's in my most recent story. (I write LOTs of stories, just most of them are about Neopets, so some people might not understand them.)Her name is Sharilia. (That's an example of one of my made-up names!!) She's NOT a Neopet, so that's probably the first story character you'll hear about from me.
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Falling from the rooftop
Crashing like a raindrop
Can you make my heart stop
Shaking like a leaf
Standing at the floodgate
Steady as an earthquake
Can you hear my heart break
Tearing at the seams
~Bebo Norman, Drifting
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Clefspeare? Could you move "When Anthrozils Meet" to this forum? *begging position* PLEASE? Thankyou.
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