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Humiliations ~ The Stories
Hello!
I have noticed that there are a fair number of posters on this website who are interested in, among other things, watching a bad girl or villainess get completely humiliated while trying to accomplish her mission.
The evil babe, going about her assignment with stealth and sex appeal, is somehow caught up in an absurdly comic situation, which ultimately leads to her demise. The situation can be extremely elaborate or as low brow as slipping on a banana peel and ending up with her head in a toilet.
I thought that those of us who are interested in this theme could participate in pseudo-writing contest. In 1000 words or less (because most of us have lives to lead), compose a story that falls into the category of "humiliation". Let's see who can create the most original and appealing scenario.
Obviously, some of us are better writers than others ... but don't let that discourage you from entering the contest. Don't even think of it as a "contest"! Its all about having fun. I'm no novelist myself, but I plan on submitting a story in a week or so.
Anybody like this idea?
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5/18/2009, 6:53 am
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Re: Humiliations ~ The Stories
A good idea, Dean. Altho' getting complete stories from people is rather far-fetched.
Perhaps a better approach for most would be to describe the humiliation/comeuppance. I think most who are interested in this genre could post a few lines describing their favorites.
For me, I like to see the bad girl get the same nasty end that she had planned for a captured heroine. "Hoisted by her own petard" I think it is called. 
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Re: Humiliations ~ The Stories
Couldn't agree more, Jimbo.
The only reason I put forth the idea of "stories" is because I've long been impressed by the quality of writing on this forum. Many of the posters are excellent storytellers and if they want to go all-out with their scenario, who am I to stop them!
Don't get me wrong, it is just as good for posters to describe their scenario in a short paragraph or two. The only criteria is that it be original and humiliating.
Cheers!
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Here's a snippet from a series I've written where the bad girl (Natalia) meets her demise at the hands of a female British secret agent.
Hope this is applicable to the vibe of the group here!
Enjoy
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Leah reached the second floor where both Karim and Natalia normally slept. In her cleaning duties she’d never been admitted to Karim’s room – it was always locked – however now she understood why. She entered the bedroom and the sight that greeted her made her stop in her tracks.
Karim was naked, spread-eagled in the middle of a huge four-poster bed. His wrists and ankles were tied to each corner of the bed and his mouth was covered by duct tape. As Leah calmly walked towards him, his eyes were looking quizzically at her, with a hint of anger flashing behind them as he saw her body suit clad figure approach him. Maybe she was part of the game, he thought, but surely not – she was just one of the cleaners.
Karim’s eyes changed from a hint of anger to flat out fear as he watched Leah raise her right leg high in to the air. Driving it down with all the force she could muster, Leah brought her heel crashing down on to Karim's throat. She rapidly followed this by smashing her left elbow into Karim's ribs, directly above his heart. If the first blow didn't kill him, the second one surely did, Leah thought as his eyes bulged in horror as he was left defenceless to his fate.
Turning to leave the room, Leah found herself staring at the black latex cat suit clad figure of Natalie looking at her from the open bathroom door.
“Impressive,” Natalia said in broken English. “Did me favour, da?”
“Don’t bet on it.” Leah replied, dropping into a combat stance. Natalia moved across the room as quickly as she could, but the six-inch stiletto heels she was wearing visibly slowed her progress. Leah knew from her military background that she was well drilled in martial arts – a fact clearly illustrated as Natalia aimed a swinging axe kick at Leah's head.
Despite not making contact, but the stiletto caught Leah's body suit below the right shoulder and tore it, highlighting the power in her kick. Leah reacted quickly, punching Natalia in the kidneys and knocking her off balance. She teetered on the dangerous heels for a moment before crashing to the floor.
Natalia rolled over several times on the floor, in order to put distance between them. Managing to quickly discard the cumbersome shoes, Natalia athletically regained her feet in one swift movement. She leapt forward and aimed a right-handed fist at Leah, using her momentum enabled her to follow this with a left-footed roundhouse. Leah avoided the punch, but could do nothing to evade the kick. Trying to press home her advantage, Natalia drilled three powerful front kicks into Leah’s chest, who countered by smashing her elbow painfully into her thigh after the third one. Natalia managed a back-handed blow with her left arm, catching Leah on the mouth and causing a small cut.
The two women circled each other warily, both of them well aware that the other was capable of landing a single lethal blow. As both women appraised each other, the door opened and another of the guards entered the room. He was unprepared for the scene that greeted him. Two women dressed in black one-piece outfits circling each other. He heard Natalia bark something at him in Russian
By the time he acclimatised and processed the order Natalia had given him, Leah had turned around and hit him with a right cross to the face, she then executed a surprisingly powerful throw which sent him flying across the room, causing him to collide with Natalia. Getting to his feet, he produced a vicious looking knife from his pocket and ran at Leah with the blade pointed forward. Using his momentum and her aikido skills, she grabbed his wrist and threw him across the room; the knife clattered as it fell to the floor. Leah grabbed the handle of the knife and threw it at him. The blade buried itself in his heart, killing him instantly.
Natalia used this opportunity to leap at Leah from behind. Using the momentary benefit of surprise, she punched Leah in the kidneys and then gripped her in a stranglehold. Her momentary advantage was lost as Leah stamped on the instep of her bare foot with her right boot before driving her elbow into her stomach. Her chokehold weakened, Leah was able to throw her over her shoulder. Natalia landed painfully on the floor.
Leah knew that if one of the guards from the first floor had heard the commotion there was a chance that any others still in residence might have. She needed to finish this quickly. Leah then moved in for the kill; as she approached, Natalia swept her legs from beneath her, taking her by surprise. As Leah hit the floor, Natalia managed to put her legs round Leah's neck, crossing her ankles to increase the strength of her grip.
Natalia had her in a vice-like grip and was slowly choking the life out of Leah, who tried to loosen the grip, but Natalia was an expert at this type of hold. It seemed that it would just be a matter of time before Leah would surely pass out and succumb to the constricting nature of her powerful leg muscles. Sensing that Natalia wasn’t going to do the sensible thing and simply break her neck, Leah tried one last desperate resort.
She tickled the soles of Natalia's bare feet.
This moved produced precisely the result Leah hoped it would as Natalia screamed and her legs opened as a natural reaction to being tickled. Leah rolled clear and managed to stand up, although she was still weak from the relentless pressure of Natalia's legs.
In turn, Natalia lunged forward, but Leah produced a stunning front kick that caught Natalia viciously in the face. Natalia was stunned at the strength of the blow and did not see the right elbow that thudded into her temple. In Natalia’s now dazed state she was completely oblivious to Leah as she leapt into the air and brought her right heel crashing down on the back of Natalia's neck.
She was dead before she hit the floor.
Leah was breathing heavily as she surveyed the room – three dead bodies and a job well done in her opinion.
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Re: Humiliations ~ The Stories
Good job I didn't post the whole thing then - it's about 65 pages long... 
However, I may have other things floating around that might float people's boats!
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Re: Humiliations ~ The Stories
Thank you for contributing your story to the thread, GreatCthulhu, albeit only a few pages of it!
You are a talented writer. A very easy and enjoyable read!
The moment that most appeals to me and the one that best represents my motivation behind creating this thread was the strategic foot tickling!
The best "humiliation" scenes often feature rather comic conclusions. The scene can be as raw, gritty and serious as you wish up until that point, but a humourous come-uppance for the villainness is usually a staple. Hence, I enjoyed the tickling because a very competent female assassin was undone by something so trivial and childish.
Hopefully you didn't mind my minor criticism
Thanks again for the first contribution!
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Re: Humiliations ~ The Stories
Actually, a friend of mine suggested that solution to me when we were having a drink one night. She was discussing the concept (and practicality) of the scissor hold and how you'd counter it in a real-life situation.
Short of going for the pressure points in the ankle, that was the only solution she could think of and she knows what she's talking about.
It works too, just in case you're wondering...
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Re: Humiliations ~ The Stories
quote:
Jimbo97 wrote:
A good idea, Dean. Altho' getting complete stories from people is rather far-fetched.
Perhaps a better approach for most would be to describe the humiliation/comeuppance. I think most who are interested in this genre could post a few lines describing their favorites.
For me, I like to see the bad girl get the same nasty end that she had planned for a captured heroine. "Hoisted by her own petard" I think it is called.
Jimbo
Ooh yes!!!
A story about a alternate ending of Fatima Blush (NSNA), or Naomi (TSWLM) or for example Areola Canasta (If looks could kill) must be funny...
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(Anything longer and I probably would pass over it.)