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#42: Synopsis
There's something wrong in the town of Valentine. But will out heroes discover what before it kills one of them?
Issue 42: New Blood
--- "When I play Bach, I play for God." -- Leticia Munoz-Moreno
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11/3/2007, 18:46
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lardboy
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Re: #42: Synopsis
Don't sound as though she's got her mojo back, does it?
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12/3/2007, 16:19
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Ray Oceanweaver
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Re: #42: Synopsis
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I'm going to stop reading Heroes. After every issue, I get this inexplicable urge to hit the author...
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12/3/2007, 17:01
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Re: #42: Synopsis
Hey, every hero (or heroine if that's not too politically incorrect nowadays) worth their salt has got to undergo a bit strife.
Still, Sarah does seem to be getting dumped on from every angle at the mo.
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12/3/2007, 18:45
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Re: #42: Synopsis
You can't say this is bad for her until you see the resolution.
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12/3/2007, 20:38
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Re: #42: Synopsis
quote: PAGE THREE. Five panels. Panel 1
PAUL is now on the ground and FRED and JAMES crowd the door behind him...
I spent a while tring to figure out why Paul fell over and how it advanced the story, maybe Fred and James pushed him over...
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Last edited by knightflyer, 17/3/2007, 22:31
--- Stuart
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"And sometimes you get what's coming around."
"And sometime you are what's coming around."
Jim Butcher, Grave Peril
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12/3/2007, 20:55
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quote: PAGE THIRTEEN. Five panels. Panel 2
... The scene takes place at night (it's not important if this isn't obvious, but it means that there should be any light from the window).
This doesn't make sense to me.
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12/3/2007, 21:08
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Ray Oceanweaver
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I'm guessing that's a typo, and it should read "shouldn't". That would make more sense.
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14/3/2007, 20:19
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David Meadows
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Re: #42: Synopsis
Ok, ok, bad writing noted and will be fixed soonish.
grumble mumble grumble
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All that we are arises with our thoughts.
With our thoughts, we make the world."
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15/3/2007, 12:15
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Re: #42: Synopsis
Dave, when Ray was wanting to lamp you, I don't think she was referring to typos or what you're calling "bad writing"...
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21/3/2007, 14:18
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