Page: 1 2
David Meadows
Editor-in-chief
Global user
Registered: 09-2003
Posts: 442
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
#49 Synopsis
Chi-Yun's back!
The Cage
--- "Is there some site on the web that offers a course in internet mindreading? Cuz everyone who's taken it should get their money back."
-- John Byrne
|
|
27/2/2008, 20:46
|
Send Email to David Meadows
Send PM to David Meadows
|
Blitzen
Superhero
Global user
Registered: 12-2004
Location: falkirk
Posts: 148
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
Yay.
--- Quick! Competition! Vote for your favourite comic scripts
http://forums.millarworld.tv/index.php?showtopic=90564&st=20
It's not clicky, though, sorry
|
|
27/2/2008, 21:06
|
Send Email to Blitzen
Send PM to Blitzen
|
Blitzen
Superhero
Global user
Registered: 12-2004
Location: falkirk
Posts: 148
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
I went psychic there, and hung about for 2 days before it was posted. Gee, I'm good.
Lots of snappy dialogue, lots of funny lines. I liked this issue except for one thing - the throwbacks. You last seen this office in issue blah, or Fennec from blah - now I'm going to have to go find out who Fennec is.
Sigh.
--- Quick! Competition! Vote for your favourite comic scripts
http://forums.millarworld.tv/index.php?showtopic=90564&st=20
It's not clicky, though, sorry
|
|
27/2/2008, 21:20
|
Send Email to Blitzen
Send PM to Blitzen
|
David Meadows
Editor-in-chief
Global user
Registered: 09-2003
Posts: 442
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
quote: Blitzen wrote:
You last seen this office in issue blah, or Fennec from blah - now I'm going to have to go find out who Fennec is.
Sigh.
That's why I put in the helpful hyperlinks.
But I know I have a problem with long-dangling subplots. It's because the picture in my head is too big to resolve in just 22 pages a month so some things end up on the back burner for a while. I'm trying to write an epic and maybe that doesn't translate to a episodic form.
I've thought about writing up a summary page for each of the open sub-plots to remind people what's been going on, but that's just another drain on my time when I should be writing issues.
--- "Is there some site on the web that offers a course in internet mindreading? Cuz everyone who's taken it should get their money back."
-- John Byrne
|
|
27/2/2008, 22:06
|
Send Email to David Meadows
Send PM to David Meadows
|
Blitzen
Superhero
Global user
Registered: 12-2004
Location: falkirk
Posts: 148
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
No, it is fine, but you could add a tiny amount of more detail... like "the office, last seen in issue 12 when Parsival was eating a sandwhich". Sort of thing.
--- Quick! Competition! Vote for your favourite comic scripts
http://forums.millarworld.tv/index.php?showtopic=90564&st=20
It's not clicky, though, sorry
|
|
27/2/2008, 22:51
|
Send Email to Blitzen
Send PM to Blitzen
|
David Meadows
Editor-in-chief
Global user
Registered: 09-2003
Posts: 442
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
I'll try to bear that in mind
--- "I have not even begun to be annoying..."
Chi-Yun returns in Heroes issue 49!
|
|
27/2/2008, 23:07
|
Send Email to David Meadows
Send PM to David Meadows
|
Ray Oceanweaver
Superhero
Global user
Registered: 04-2003
Location: England, UK
Posts: 175
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
... *whimper* ...
--- Rachel
~The optimist fails as badly as the pessimist, just has a better time of it~
Wings of Rapture - For Writers of Erotica and Romance
|
|
28/2/2008, 13:41
|
Send Email to Ray Oceanweaver
Send PM to Ray Oceanweaver
Blog
|
Blitzen
Superhero
Global user
Registered: 12-2004
Location: falkirk
Posts: 148
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
Poor Ray baby awww, every1 say awww.
--- Quick! Competition! Vote for your favourite comic scripts
http://forums.millarworld.tv/index.php?showtopic=90564&st=20
It's not clicky, though, sorry
|
|
28/2/2008, 14:12
|
Send Email to Blitzen
Send PM to Blitzen
|
David Meadows
Editor-in-chief
Global user
Registered: 09-2003
Posts: 442
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
Honestly, she complains because Chi-Yun's not in it, so I put her in and she still complains
Right! That's it! No more Chi-Yun for the rest of volume 5
--- "I have not even begun to be annoying..."
Chi-Yun returns in Heroes issue 49!
|
|
28/2/2008, 14:44
|
Send Email to David Meadows
Send PM to David Meadows
|
Blitzen
Superhero
Global user
Registered: 12-2004
Location: falkirk
Posts: 148
|
|
Reply | Quote
|
|
Re: #49 Synopsis
I'll expect to see her return in issue 60 then...
--- Quick! Competition! Vote for your favourite comic scripts
http://forums.millarworld.tv/index.php?showtopic=90564&st=20
It's not clicky, though, sorry
|
|
28/2/2008, 16:41
|
Send Email to Blitzen
Send PM to Blitzen
|
Add a reply
Page: 1 2
Link to us
- Blogs
- Hall of Honour
- Chat
|
You are not logged in (login)
Board's time is: 27/11/2009, 5:56
|
|
|