Re: The Unnamed Fiction [my first Metallica fanfic with no real title] Hi MMinna! Welcome to the Fic section.
I think you've got a good beginning! And having a beta is a really good idea. A second set of eyes is so helpful.
Totally enjoyed the dream section of the post. I didn't want her to wake up. Her dream sounds so much nicer than real life.
My only other comment (and it's a personal preference) would be to maybe think about making a new paragraph (with a space between) for each time a new person speaks. It's just easier on the eyes. Up to you, though, since you're the one posting.
Re: The Unnamed Fiction [my first Metallica fanfic with no real title] Great start but you knew that. Off course you can call me Simone keep up the great work.
Re: The Unnamed Fiction [my first Metallica fanfic with no real title] Metalicious, thanks for the tip [paragraph-thing], I'll do that. I usually write long (as in no spaces between the lines) paragraphs, but the only reason I do that, is simply the fact that I usually write on paper (and I'd be wasting paper if I had all the lines on different paragraphs ). But since I am writing on computer now, I can't really waste any paper
Simone, thanks for your reply as well.
I'm really glad you guys liked it, I really adore your ficcies.
I'm working on a new chapter right now [and shame on me, I should be studying Swedish and mathematics ], but I'm not sure when I'll get it up. I want Simone to read it first and since she's on holiday, it'll take a while.
Re: The Unnamed Fiction [my first Metallica fanfic with no real title] I will continue. I have the next part ready, but before I post it here I'll send it to Simone. So the next part will hopefully be up tomorrow or Wednesday.
keep up the great work.
). But since I am writing on computer now, I can't really waste any paper 
], but I'm not sure when I'll get it up. I want Simone to read it first and since she's on holiday, it'll take a while. 
