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Tian Roderh
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Well, here it is--my first PPC. Concrit greatly appreciated. Note: this is a "Pirates of the Caribbean" fic.

http://www.webspawner.com/users/agentgallowglass/index.html

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Just a few thoughts to add:
1) This is rated about PG13 for violence and a bit of language.
2) I'm Agent Glass. My partner is Lena.
3) I do not know the author or title of the original story. When we went back to look for it on fanfiction.net, we couldn't find it. Apologies are thus offered to the original author for using her/his/its words without a note of the owner.

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Come on...somebody should read it...[/whine]

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I can't believe I didn't post in here! Oops... emoticon

I read about half of it almost right after you started this thread. I thought it was totally hilarious, and I really enjoyed the scene where your partner MSTs a bit. emoticon

Note to self: read end.

Your PPC is great! It makes me want to branch out into PPCing. The nice thing about it is if the story is this gawdawful 40 chapter monstrosity, you can skim the words! This is a little harder in MSTing... emoticon Hm... that gives me an idea for the current project of doom...

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I'm sorry it took me so long...I did finally read it though, and my my...quite hilarious. ^^ I haven't read many PPC's, 'cos I prefer MSTs, but this was quite good. I liked the 'Sue's fate especially. So appropriate. ^_^

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Ooh, now I really have to read it!

 :arr: Avast! Arr! emoticon

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^_^ Teh love!


Actually, this particular piece of...writing...was only two and a half pages. It might have been a better story if it were longer. The author could have been forced to include some exposition and description. *shock!horror!*

Kiwi, wait'll you see what we do to the next one...not as entertaining, but...

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Ex...po...sition? That's...*counts on fingers* 4 syllables! Authors of Teh Badfic(TM) do not do 4 syllable words. emoticon

And I'm looking forward to the next one, even if you don't think it's going to be entertaining. ^_^

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Bwahaha!! Teh Badfic, that's hilarious Gundam! emoticon emoticon

Maybe that's why there's no char-ac-ter-i-za-tion... SIX syllables! emoticon

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Yush...Teh Badfic...^_^

Can some of those authors even count to six?

Woo, this is getting mean...oh well! XD Who's next?

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