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Re: MST Relay - MSTing for the entire board!
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I meant for the next part. Don't know about you, but I don't especially want to redo this >_<
Word to that buddy. Yeah, at the end of the first part, we can invite you over to our MST room.
We do our MSTs in an abandonned building, the one that makes our banner actually.
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Seraphimlance wrote:Can always gate over.
Gate?
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Seraphimlance wrote:Or have her fic (The ages should eb enough to do so) rip a hole in space time, and deposite one group in with another.
Actually, I'm going to do something like that in my MST of "The Story of her life". The darn thing is so freaking long I still haven't finished it. I need to work on that one some more because I have a cool plan for it.
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3/6/2006, 18:38
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Seraphimlance
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Re: MST Relay - MSTing for the entire board!
Gate: Stargate reference.
Also, to teleport, or travel in any near-instantaneous means.
In my circle of friends, it has a few other more impressive meanings, but they won't make much sense.
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Re: MST Relay - MSTing for the entire board!
Jared: When am going to get my paycheck?
Jake: (As Denethor) Um… it’s already in the mail… Maybe you should go check it.
Ack! >_<
Should read as (If my typing was better):
Jared: When am I going to get my paycheck?
Jake: (As Denethor) Um… it’s already in the mail… Maybe you should go check it.
And:
Jake: He started a landwar against Russia?
Jared: He debated against a Vulcan?
Steve: He made Legolas a girl?
Chris: He let himself be the Uke?
Jake: (Smacks Chris) Chris no Baka!
Jared: (Smacks Jake) No babling in other languages.
Steve: (Smacks Jared, everyone looks at him) What? All the cool kids were doing it.
Should be (Same reason):
Jake: He started a landwar against Russia?
Jared: He debated against a Vulcan?
Steve: He made Legolas a girl?
Chris: He let himself be the Uke?
Jake: (Smacks Chris) Chris no Baka!
Jared: (Smacks Jake) No babbling in other languages.
Steve: (Smacks Jared, everyone looks at him) What? All the cool kids were doing it.
I appear to have not posted a scene change, sorry bout that, can't find it, so improve time:
S: (Denathor) I will raise the Sue as my own.
N: You shouldn't take in stray Sues from the wild. They aren't used to people so they keep using their speshul powerz.
Aldin closed his eyes in relief,
Steve: (As Steward, holding nose) My god Man! Warn someone before you do that!
Should be:
S: (Denathor) I will raise the Sue as my own.
N: You shouldn't take in stray Sues from the wild. They aren't used to people so they keep using their speshul powerz.
(Scene change)
Aldin closed his eyes in relief,
Steve: (As Steward, holding nose) My god Man! Warn someone before you do that!
Chris: Wait, what? Our turn again already?
I didn't spot anything else in my first bits, I'll check again for the later ones.
I noticed I had quite a few weak jokes, If I find replacements for them, I'll post them here. ^^
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Hope is the destination that we seek.
Love is the road that leads to hope.
Courage is the motor that drives us.
We travel out of darkness into faith.
------The Book of Counted Sorrows
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3/18/2006, 16:55
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Seraphimlance wrote:
Jared: When am going to get my paycheck?
Jake: (As Denethor) Um… it’s already in the mail… Maybe you should go check it.
Ack! >_<
Should read as (If my typing was better):
Jared: When am I going to get my paycheck?
Jake: (As Denethor) Um… it’s already in the mail… Maybe you should go check it.
I don't see the difference between the two. 
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Seraphimlance wrote:
Should be (Same reason):
Jake: He started a landwar against Russia?
Jared: He debated against a Vulcan?
Steve: He made Legolas a girl?
Chris: He let himself be the Uke?
Jake: (Smacks Chris) Chris no Baka!
Jared: (Smacks Jake) No babbling in other languages.
Steve: (Smacks Jared, everyone looks at him) What? All the cool kids were doing it.
Again, I don't see any differences in spelling. But "uke" and "baka" shouldn't be capitalised as they are not proper nouns. 
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Seraphimlance wrote:
I appear to have not posted a scene change, sorry bout that, can't find it, so improve time:
S: (Denathor) I will raise the Sue as my own.
N: You shouldn't take in stray Sues from the wild. They aren't used to people so they keep using their speshul powerz.
Aldin closed his eyes in relief,
Steve: (As Steward, holding nose) My god Man! Warn someone before you do that!
Should be:
S: (Denathor) I will raise the Sue as my own.
N: You shouldn't take in stray Sues from the wild. They aren't used to people so they keep using their speshul powerz.
(Scene change)
Aldin closed his eyes in relief,
Steve: (As Steward, holding nose) My god Man! Warn someone before you do that!
Chris: Wait, what? Our turn again already?
I didn't spot anything else in my first bits, I'll check again for the later ones.
I noticed I had quite a few weak jokes, If I find replacements for them, I'll post them here. ^^
No prob.  I updated the file with the scene change.
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I added an "I" in the first one "When am I going to get"
And, added a second "b" in "Babbling", "No Babbling in other languages"
Just minor changes, nothing two big, thanks for updating with the scene change.
Let me know when it's my turn to make another scene change. ^^
Last edited by Seraphimlance, 3/19/2006, 13:10
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Love is the road that leads to hope.
Courage is the motor that drives us.
We travel out of darkness into faith.
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Before mostly, I did a small after on my first one, but it was stupid, and I'll probably try and edit it out.
Before it's declared done, can me and Kiwi edit it for our parts? Like in word, and send you a doc of the changed parts?
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Hope is the destination that we seek.
Love is the road that leads to hope.
Courage is the motor that drives us.
We travel out of darkness into faith.
------The Book of Counted Sorrows
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