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a poem i wrote about Loraine Allison
i couldnt find where to put this. if there is somewhere more appropriate, please move it. the poem is really quite awful but it came from the heart lol.
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Re: a poem i wrote about Loraine Allison
bess that is a magnificant poem. and i believe it belongs right here.
thank you very much for sharing.
you have a good talent .
please feel free to share anything
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Re: a poem i wrote about Loraine Allison
That was lovely, Bess. Thanks for sharing it.
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That was indeed lovely, Bess...I have always felt a pull at my heartstrings every time I think of little Lorraine...so much promise and brightness...gone for a time but not forgotten.
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yes i too think it is beautifull bess.
anymore you would like to share?
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I have another. i do try but i should really listen to what what my english lit teacher told me...i'm no good at this stuff lol
here:
thrashing, in freezing water, which cuts like a knife,
every man, woman and child struggles for their life
survivors watch from tiny  , they see their lovers die
the ship, they said was unsinkable, which surely was a lie
as each soul rose and left this world, an angel in heaven was gained
loved ones cried and greived their loss, for in their hearts it rained
forever they felt the guilt of living, and prayed for those who died
there werent enough life for all, a fact which was denied
Titanic, the great ship of dreams, and her victims have now gone
but the love, sadness and most importantly - the memory will live on
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Re: a poem i wrote about Loraine Allison
Those poems are lovely. The one about Loraine is particularly touching and is obviously heartfelt
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Re: a poem i wrote about Loraine Allison
thank you graham, it was heartfelt. i personally dont think i have much talent but since i write them, i thought my dear freinds here could suffer lol. and will did ask if i had any others i wanted to share 
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You have great talent I for one look forward to your posts 
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*blushes* thank you
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