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bess
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Men of Titanic

I don't really know if this poem makes sense. i wrote it a while back... but here goes

"I'll pray for you Darling!!!"
the crying women say
in their tiny emoticon they go away
they leave their men alone to die
on a sinking ship, under a dark sky

Each man stood and waited his fate
to live inside heavens gate
a noble nod and a polite smile
rich and poor wait for awhile

suddenly thier time arrives
they have no time to say good byes
fear in their hearts like no-one knows
those men of Titanic ~ My heroes

Sep/10/2004, 10:49 pm EMAILbess   PM bess ICQ MSN
 
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It is hard to imagine the awful realization that they were never going to see their loved ones again. How they coped I have no idea. How do you tell your children? How long before you truly realize the truth?
it's chilling if thought of deeply.

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ohhh bess i got cold shivers run through my spine/ wow . that was very nice .

it gets straight to the point. and it is very poingnant as well.

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Whatever obstacles control,
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Yeah it definitely does...beautiful work, bess!

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"What I remember about that night- what I will remember as long as I live- is the people crying out to each other as the stern began to plunge down. I heard people crying, 'I love you.'"
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Thank you.
I do try, i am going through a bit of a poetry phase at the moment lol.
Sep/12/2004, 1:55 am EMAILbess   PM bess ICQ MSN
 


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