bess
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Titanic poem
thrashing, in freezing water, which cuts like a knife,
every man, woman and child struggles for their life
survivors watch from tiny  , they see their lovers die
the ship, they said was unsinkable, which surely was a lie
as each soul rose and left this world, an angel in heaven was gained
loved ones cried and greived their loss, for in their hearts it rained
forever they felt the guilt of living, and prayed for those who died
there werent enough life for all, a fact which was denied
Titanic, the great ship of dreams, and her victims have now gone
but the love, sadness and most importantly - the memory will live on
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Sep/13/2004, 1:12 pm
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Merzibelle
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Re: Titanic poem
*sniffle* Tis lovely, Bess. Very good.
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And the sea will grant each man new hope, as sleep brings dreams of home. ~ Christopher Columbus.
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Sep/13/2004, 1:18 pm
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Your refference to heaven gaining angels is one worth thinking about. For it means that there is no death. The body may die but the soul does not. Memory serves the living as a link to the past and to those who have gone from this world.
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bess
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I didn't think that deeply about it lol, i have always believed that when you die you go to heaven to rest for a while and stuff..........anyway, i'm glad you both like it.
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Sep/13/2004, 11:56 pm
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yes bess it was very touching thanks so much for sharing it with all of us.
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Suicide is a permenant solution to a temporay problem........
Whatever obstacles control,
Go on, true heart,
thou'lt reach the goal.
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wills~~~~~
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