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Re: my poem-What once was.
hi,
thank-you very much!
bye,lolly,
--- ''I kiss you 10000000 times,but I can't count it myself!''-Tatiana Romanov.
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Re: my poem-What once was.
You are quite welcome dear.
You really do have a gift .
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Re: my poem-What once was.
hi,thanks,
here are a couple more:
Home
I sit alone, missing you and wishing you were here so that i could hold you,thouch you,and feel your lips carese mine, I am alone without you, there is no one more than you to love me. do i have reason to live without you by my side?without your love for me to light the flame inside,! have nothing , I am for nothing but a spark yearning to burn. This spark is whats left of me and as it slowly dies, I think this is it,my end. but then i feel your arms hold my fading light and I am held there by the chains of your love for me,that shall but never be left broken, I am no longer alone, but am home.
Sparrow
There is a child, alone without anything or anyone, she passes by me and a sweet smile like that of a child that has everything that a child's heart could dream, she is like a sparrow, she soars through the skys and makes other's smile by the smile which she makes even if she is broken inside.
bye,lolly,
--- ''I kiss you 10000000 times,but I can't count it myself!''-Tatiana Romanov.
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Apr/18/2007, 9:22 pm
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Re: my poem-What once was.
fantastic.
thanks for sharing ..
Wills
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Go on, true heart,
thou'lt reach the goal.
http://com4.runboard.com/bthetitanicshack
wills~~~~~
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loraineA
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Re: my poem-What once was.
hi,
thank-you!
bye,lolly,
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Apr/19/2007, 1:07 am
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Re: my poem-What once was.
hi, i got a poem for you guys to check out! LOL!
bye,Lolly,
Ice
The night was calm but then like a knife is silenced the screams of a thousand souls,cold like chrome it stole heart and soul and dripped from fingertips like blood and yet as if a soul were to survive could the fear and horror leave it's eyes of the power of the water cold as ice that cut like a knife?
--- ''I kiss you 10000000 times,but I can't count it myself!''-Tatiana Romanov.
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Apr/23/2007, 8:20 pm
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Re: my poem-What once was.
Another good one .. I find the comparisons in this one rather interesting . Good job ..
Wills
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Go on, true heart,
thou'lt reach the goal.
http://com4.runboard.com/bthetitanicshack
wills~~~~~
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Apr/23/2007, 10:13 pm
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Re: my poem-What once was.
hi,
thanks, yeah i had fun writing that one the way i did!
bye,lolly,
here are some more:
Shelter.
I looked for you yet could not see,then i hear my name coming from your voice in the night,my mind reveals your smiling face and outstretched arms ready to hold me and shelter me from all the sadness and horror,but then suddenly you disapper and so does the memory and reality hits me like a rock striking my little skull,and i realize here i am in the wet and cold, i lose sight of whats real and whats not and then i lose the life that was once mine never to regain the life of that little soul again and to be held by your smile and enlightened by your thouch.
If I die before I wake.
If i die before i wake,so as i drift to sleep let me drift to the heaven's and with God i shall keep, now i shall sleep in his arms as i dream and the angels sing a lullabye so sweetly you could weep.
Last edited by loraineA, Apr/23/2007, 10:59 pm
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Apr/23/2007, 10:38 pm
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Re: my poem-What once was.
Absolutely beautiful and haunting . thanks for sharing it with us.
Very nice indeed.
Wills
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Go on, true heart,
thou'lt reach the goal.
http://com4.runboard.com/bthetitanicshack
wills~~~~~
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Apr/25/2007, 12:55 am
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Re: my poem-What once was.
hi,
your most welcome!
bye,lolly,
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Apr/25/2007, 8:47 pm
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