Smokespree
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Looking for honest (constructive) feedback on my stand up!!
Hi!! I am pretty new to stand up and Im looking for some honest (constructive) feedback on a set I did at Carolines on Broadway in NYC last month. I guess since this is a forum of writers you would be best to critique my timing, punchlines and joke form in general. This was my first real performance so of course I am and always will be a work in progress as a stand up comic but I would like some impartial critique. Thanks!!
My performance at Carolines 9/4/07
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This is what happens when people are held hostage.
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10/11/2007, 2:03 pm
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