Mr Titanic
Spirit of the Night
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My Eyes
This is a poem I have written told through the emotions of someone who may have lost their love on the Titanic. I suppose it is from my own thoughts however in whatever way you with to incorperate it into your mind is entirley up to you.
"My Eyes"
By James Sapphire
I never once thought I had lost your love, Ionly felt that I did
Memories are only shattered peices of a once complete portrait of you
I've lost my soul attempting to search for your heart
I had given you all the love my heart could spew, and was left empty having lost your love in return
Life pushed me over when I was hollow, and I shattered at her feet
I'll struggle to strip you off my mind forever, but know that in the wells of my heart you are immortal
So when I do finally walk away from you, when waves thrash upon the shore of that beach...
Taking smooth toned steps across all that is laced about the silken sand..
You can expect I'll be catching tear drops in the palms of my hands.
Last edited by Mr Titanic, Jul/8/2005, 3:22 pm
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Jul/8/2005, 12:11 pm
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bess
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Re: My Eyes
wow Mr T, that is a gorgoues poem. the last two line made me cry. it is really beautiful I have some poems but i can't post them because they aren't Titanic related lol
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Jul/8/2005, 5:57 pm
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Mr Titanic
Spirit of the Night
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Re: My Eyes
Aww Thanks bess, Actually you can, because this one only can be preceived as a Titanic poem it is not nessesarily one at all really. But I am glad you like it, I was in a rather depressed mood when I wrote it this morning.
James
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Jul/8/2005, 6:16 pm
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MurdochsAid
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Re: My Eyes
Great poem, James!!!!!!!   Awww, but that poem takes on such a familiar tone...as to what has been happening on the board lately. I know "the" feeling. :hug:
Thank you for sharing.
MA
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Jul/9/2005, 8:38 am
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Mr Titanic
Spirit of the Night
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Re: My Eyes
Thanks Guys 
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Jul/9/2005, 9:57 am
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The Foxes
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Re: My Eyes
Yep I liked your poem a lot, I was able too see it in my mind eye. Well done.
TF 
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Jul/17/2005, 7:43 pm
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Mr Titanic
Spirit of the Night
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Re: My Eyes
Thank you Graham, it really is a fine sign for an author to know that whoever is reading their work understands where they are comming from. 
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Jul/17/2005, 8:56 pm
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