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The Return Of Holly And Rachel
Before we begin i would just like to point out that this story is written in the form of a handbook guide by an unknown client for Holly and Rachel's next operation.
I would also like to mention that this will lead up to an amazing art story, that esercito sconfitto has chosen to do, so alot of credit should go to him for all his idea's.
The return of Holly and Rachel.
Written by Prototype001.
To Holly and Rachel, i thank you for chosing to accept my little operation i have in mind. Down below is a guide of what you two will need to do to get this job done, oh and for the record, this job is classified for certain reasons so in order to may this look like a pirate attack on the ship. You must Strip the crew down to their underwear and take their uniforms and boots with you.
Firstly you will swim to the ship and board it from the side. From there you will continue to make your way to the control tower, inside will be at least three female communication workers, You must first take them down and bound and gag them in their underwear before taking all communications down.
From here you will continue to make your across the main deck taking down any female navy personal that stand between you and the fem-officers quarters, we estimate at about two or four or five. The officers will not be so easy to take down as the other crew members so i suggest you take down a couple of the fem-officer and wear there clothes so you lead the other fem-officers one by one to a good K.O and stripping.
Now with there COM system down and there leaders taking a little nap, you should find out where the off duty crew members just to be sure they have no way of grabbing any reinforcements at the last second, and who knows if you're lucky enough you might even be able to catch a few of them asleep in their underwear all ready.
With the ship very slowly becoming yours, time will be essential, becuase sooner or later the rest of the crey will be suspecting strange things going on, so the last main part to go to, will be the engine room. Inside the engine room should be noisy so don't be afraid to get your hands down and dirty in this room and please remember the more fem-naval crew members that are seen bound and gagged in their underwear the more convincing it is that pirates done this. By shutting those things down the rest of the ship should be easy to take down.
But hey i'm just an unknown client who thinks they've got it all worked out, so who knows, this plan may NOT go as well and we think, depending on your actions.
Hope to hear from you soon......
THE END.
NOTE: Hi there esercito sconfitto and i hope you like the little message that was sent to Holly and Rachel to start there mission. Also if there is anything you either want to add / put in or delete or edit, please feel free since this story is yours
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10/19/2009, 9:07 pm
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esercito sconfitto
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Re: The Return Of Holly And Rachel
this reply has been edited, according to board's rules
P.S. soon the illustrated version of this story wiil be posted on my own message board-
sorry again for my bad behaviour
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10/19/2009, 9:36 pm
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Re: The Return Of Holly And Rachel
Hi esercito sconfitto and i'm glad i could help. and i'm looking forward to this story.
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10/19/2009, 11:02 pm
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10/22/2009, 8:55 pm
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Re: The Return Of Holly And Rachel
You had better read my final warning in general discussion about the mention of killing around here before you trash talk yourself right off this board.
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10/23/2009, 12:56 am
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Re: The Return Of Holly And Rachel
Slain is okay with deaths in stories and scenes as long as it is not talked about a lot and in extreme detail. He does however has an issue with people complaining about deaths in a scene and does not want to hear any of it (complaining whether a character died or not in a scene or story). At least that is my understanding. In short stick with uniform stealing and don't go into too much detail about what happens to the character or worry about it I guess.
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Re: The Return Of Holly And Rachel
hi guys and have no fear, i'm someone that takes the rules of this forum very seriously, and i won't do anything to break them.
Hi there esercito sconfitto and i'm not really sure what to do from here on out in the story. Sorry about that.
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i love this board.
it's awesome and i'm not going to break the rules.
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